tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6262333545403317179.post2911673629237248692..comments2023-06-27T03:43:26.088-07:00Comments on Writing Tavern: ChildhoodStaceyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05545908191962677176noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6262333545403317179.post-2033773474866361482011-02-17T09:48:51.737-08:002011-02-17T09:48:51.737-08:00Either story would have been sufficient--the 13 ye...Either story would have been sufficient--the 13 year old girls at the bowling alley or the birth of A & A--but to have them combine like this is a real treat. You had me! I was in suspense. I've seen my wife trying to reposition unborn baby goats, so I know what you're talking about.<br /><br />Anyway, keeping two stories rolling along, keeping sight of those girls braiding hair and the sheep with the wonderful fleece, keeping track of the adolescent children and of the newborn sheep is quite a trick and you pull it off in great style. The tone here is by turns funny, suspenseful, dark, light--I hope you feel satisfied with this, feel good about the work you show here. I sure do.johngoldfinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09322562737172405323noreply@blogger.com